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	<title>Comments on: From Ali to Xena: 16</title>
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		<title>By: Dina</title>
		<link>http://www.bronxbanterblog.com/2011/07/07/from-ali-to-xena-16/#comment-87343</link>
		<dc:creator>Dina</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 07 Jul 2011 23:10:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;ll toss my name in the ring too. I was a copy editor for about 20 minutes on my college newspaper and now I do a lot of editing on grants and other documents.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;ll toss my name in the ring too. I was a copy editor for about 20 minutes on my college newspaper and now I do a lot of editing on grants and other documents.</p>
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		<title>By: Alex Belth</title>
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		<dc:creator>Alex Belth</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 07 Jul 2011 20:39:32 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>5 and 8) You guys rule.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>5 and 8) You guys rule.</p>
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		<title>By: Bronx Boy in NC</title>
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		<dc:creator>Bronx Boy in NC</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 07 Jul 2011 20:09:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Alex, I&#039;ll second Shaun&#039;s offer. Fits right in with what I&#039;m doing for a living all day anyhow. If you&#039;re trying to keep things moving at different hours of the day and night, it can&#039;t hurt to have some bench depth. You know my background and where to grab hold of me.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Alex, I&#8217;ll second Shaun&#8217;s offer. Fits right in with what I&#8217;m doing for a living all day anyhow. If you&#8217;re trying to keep things moving at different hours of the day and night, it can&#8217;t hurt to have some bench depth. You know my background and where to grab hold of me.</p>
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		<title>By: Alex Belth</title>
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		<dc:creator>Alex Belth</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 07 Jul 2011 18:58:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>5) I may just take you up on that, man. Thanks.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>5) I may just take you up on that, man. Thanks.</p>
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		<title>By: Alex Belth</title>
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		<dc:creator>Alex Belth</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 07 Jul 2011 18:57:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I wonder what the culture of the Times was like at the time. If it was editor-driven like the Post because it was a paper of record.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I wonder what the culture of the Times was like at the time. If it was editor-driven like the Post because it was a paper of record.</p>
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		<title>By: Shaun P.</title>
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		<dc:creator>Shaun P.</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 07 Jul 2011 18:57:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[2][3] Among lawyers, there&#039;s a saying that great legal writing is great legal editing.  Its never said, but that includes great proof reading.  In law school, my first year writing teacher, an Assistant DA, gave a great practical lesson on becoming a great legal editor.

After we turned in our first assignment, he made two copies of each one.  Everyone in the class received one copy of their own assignment, and one copy of someone else&#039;s.  He then told us to find whatever typos we could in both pieces.  To a person, we all found more typos in the assignment someone else wrote, and missed many in our own assignments.  It was a lot easier, he said, to find typos when your eyes and brain are fresh - that is, when you read something for the first time.  Since then, when a typo is unacceptable, I always have a fresh pair of eyes proof read my writing.  I&#039;m constantly amazed at the typos I still miss, no matter how careful I am.

The longer I practice law, the more I realize that I, too, am a professional writer.  I&#039;m just on the flip side of the coin that one conjures up when one hears the word &quot;writer&quot;.  I&#039;m grateful for the opportunity to read and learn about the more typical side, from the inside.

[3] Alex, if you really wanted someone to help catch mistakes pre-posting, I would think there must a retired or semi-retired copy editor who reads the Banter and could help out.  I am neither of those things, but I&#039;d gladly volunteer to do it, if we could make the timing work.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[2][3] Among lawyers, there&#8217;s a saying that great legal writing is great legal editing.  Its never said, but that includes great proof reading.  In law school, my first year writing teacher, an Assistant DA, gave a great practical lesson on becoming a great legal editor.</p>
<p>After we turned in our first assignment, he made two copies of each one.  Everyone in the class received one copy of their own assignment, and one copy of someone else&#8217;s.  He then told us to find whatever typos we could in both pieces.  To a person, we all found more typos in the assignment someone else wrote, and missed many in our own assignments.  It was a lot easier, he said, to find typos when your eyes and brain are fresh &#8211; that is, when you read something for the first time.  Since then, when a typo is unacceptable, I always have a fresh pair of eyes proof read my writing.  I&#8217;m constantly amazed at the typos I still miss, no matter how careful I am.</p>
<p>The longer I practice law, the more I realize that I, too, am a professional writer.  I&#8217;m just on the flip side of the coin that one conjures up when one hears the word &#8220;writer&#8221;.  I&#8217;m grateful for the opportunity to read and learn about the more typical side, from the inside.</p>
<p>[3] Alex, if you really wanted someone to help catch mistakes pre-posting, I would think there must a retired or semi-retired copy editor who reads the Banter and could help out.  I am neither of those things, but I&#8217;d gladly volunteer to do it, if we could make the timing work.</p>
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		<title>By: Jon DeRosa</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jon DeRosa</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 07 Jul 2011 18:55:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[3] somebody had to click &quot;post,&quot; right? and don&#039;t forget the pics.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[3] somebody had to click &#8220;post,&#8221; right? and don&#8217;t forget the pics.</p>
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		<title>By: Alex Belth</title>
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		<dc:creator>Alex Belth</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 07 Jul 2011 18:26:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;ve got nothing to do with it. This is all John. But you are welcome! Yeah, the good thing is that we can go in and correct mistakes but we should have a higher standard not to make them at all. I&#039;ve started to print things out to proof read because I can read more thoroughly off a piece of paper than I can off the computer screen.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;ve got nothing to do with it. This is all John. But you are welcome! Yeah, the good thing is that we can go in and correct mistakes but we should have a higher standard not to make them at all. I&#8217;ve started to print things out to proof read because I can read more thoroughly off a piece of paper than I can off the computer screen.</p>
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		<title>By: Jon DeRosa</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jon DeRosa</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 07 Jul 2011 18:18:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Alex and John, thanks for this incredible account you guys have put out.

For some reason, I can&#039;t find the mistakes until they&#039;re posted and then they stick out there like glowing xmas ornaments.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Alex and John, thanks for this incredible account you guys have put out.</p>
<p>For some reason, I can&#8217;t find the mistakes until they&#8217;re posted and then they stick out there like glowing xmas ornaments.</p>
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		<title>By: Alex Belth</title>
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		<dc:creator>Alex Belth</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 07 Jul 2011 17:59:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I never had to deal with nasty copy editors. That&#039;s one good part about writing a blog. The downside, and I&#039;ve spoken to John about this, and other veteran writers too, is that there are no editors. Mistakes, careless, sloppy mistakes go out there with nobody to check up on it. We have alert readers and my fellow writers at the Banter will point out mistakes but still there are too many that get by. I&#039;m guilty of being lazy, well, not so much lazy, but in such a rush to get the next post up that I don&#039;t go over it thoroughly. A copy editor wouldn&#039;t let me get away with that crap.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I never had to deal with nasty copy editors. That&#8217;s one good part about writing a blog. The downside, and I&#8217;ve spoken to John about this, and other veteran writers too, is that there are no editors. Mistakes, careless, sloppy mistakes go out there with nobody to check up on it. We have alert readers and my fellow writers at the Banter will point out mistakes but still there are too many that get by. I&#8217;m guilty of being lazy, well, not so much lazy, but in such a rush to get the next post up that I don&#8217;t go over it thoroughly. A copy editor wouldn&#8217;t let me get away with that crap.</p>
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